THE WORK ↓
it’s 11 o’clock
at night &
i’m striking the bong
standing at my window, staring
at the lights,
pondering the universe
& the past
i can’t explain much
about what has happened
or what will
i can only tell you that
11 o’clock at night
is a lonely time
to be standing at my window,
holding a bong
PERSON RESPONSIBLE
Lance Watson's poetry operates at the intersection of space and time. Haha. Okay, that's bullshit. But what the fuck. Lance Watson writes poetry and other shit sometimes when he gets high, which is more often than probably most people should, but as I said, what the fuck. LOL. Have fun, folks. --Lance Watson
P.S. If you've never written about yourself in the third person, as though you were dead, you should try it sometime. Why? How the fuck would I know. It's fun.
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Tom Strong
Enjoyed Lance. For me I thing changing "looking" to "staring" in S2 and dropping the the last 2 lines creates the image of pondering without telling the reader that's what yer doing in lines 3&4. Just a thought, reads fine as is too.
Lance Watson
Love the word change idea. Thanks!
Daniel J. Flore III
This is great!!
Lance Watson
thanks dan